…answers pending. We’re closing in, folks. I have nothing really to say other than tackling the nit-pickies trying to get this thing up and running.

Of course...I have no product yet. Just covers.  :lol:  Oh, and a few, mostly-corrected files. Now that we’ve got Carolyn’s test file up on her site, that’ll help a lot. Once we know the process, it’s all mechanics.

Have faith!

A sneak preview of the opening page is up at Closed Circle. Not that it’ll tell you much…the link buttons aren’t on it yet and there’s nothing live, but I can say that page will have links to all the major internal pages. That’s what the buttons are for at the bottom.

I’m exhausted, but I think we’re getting somewhere. Wish us luck…

And we’re testing the paypal shopping cart. For some reason, the delete function works fine in IE, but not firefox. I’ve got a query in. Hopefully, will have an answer soon. Spent a lot of the day beating my head against the wall because the shopping cart wasn’t showing up. Finally realized…I’d never activated the sidebar widget. I had in the free version, but for downloads, we needed the paid version. (Which means, we have to sell at least six of the backlist books! :D) I upgraded and forgot that step.

These plugins and their spotty at best documentation. Not for the weary of mind, I tell you! But…we’re making progress. I’m hoping to get it functional so that I can take a couple of days next week to actually get a couple of my books ready for download!

Oi…multi-tasking. Hard on my old brain….

Hang in there!

…just paid for itself several times over.

I’ve never said this, but I actually wanted this drive for one reason and one reason only. All the sorting of files and Carolyn’s Herculean efforts notwithstanding, what I wanted was one tiny text file, created by notebook, which had eluded me for years. I can’t even begin to count the hours, days, weeks I’ve spent searching disks for this little gem.

Last night, Carolyn found that blessed little file.

Back when I finished the initial ‘Netwalkers, I sent it to two dear friends who gave me magnificent quotes to send along with it to publishers. One was the darling Rob Sawyer (now of Flash Forward fame, but author of so many wonderful stories) and the other was my dear friend and endless supporter, the now best-selling author Patricia Briggs.

Patty is one of the most supportive authors in the business, and fame hasn’t changed that one bit. She’s an author who has never lost the love of reading, and she’s a very fast and clever reader, in the sense that she quickly “groks” the essence of what makes a story pleasurable to her (or not so pleasurable).  She’s an utter delight to share writers’ workshop duties with because of her insight and her deft manner of expressing those “less than pleasurable” aspects of a story.

Patty spent her time in the trenches writing magnificent mid-list fantasy which got, like so many, lost in the detritus of too many mediocre books on the shelves.  Those years of work and that generous appreciation of every form of literature have paid off. When NY decided that Urban Fantasy was the only way to go, she was already a fan of the form, had read extensively, both the good and the bad, and was more than prepared to accept the challenge. Had she any idea the second Mercy book would become a #1 bestseller? Of course not. Like all good authors, she was just trying to write a good story about characters she liked. But Patty, unlike so many, had done that work in the trenches and so wasn’t trying to break in using a popular medium, but was writing something charmingly original, with the skill of a seasoned veteran.

All that being said, back when she read NW, she wrote me this wonderful quote. I sent it to my agent and DAW…both lost it. Meantime, the emails that had been the exchange method, had been lost in moves, backups, and such (I’m sure the Outlook archive with it in still exists somewhere on a disk). At one point, in anticipation of a happier outcome for NW, I made it into a little text file and put it with my stuff to use on me website.

Then, the years of silence from DAW came. I decided to quite waiting for them and put the quote up on my website anyway, but could I find it? Of course not. Hours and hours of going through CDs with searches that should have found it and then file by file searching didn’t turn it up.

Patty has generously offered to write me another, and for certain, I plan to take her up on it, now we have CC to make use of it, but something in me really longed for this quote, because nothing is ever quite like that first reaction.

But last night, Carolyn found it, and it’s as wonderful as I remembered. So…without further ado: Patty’s quote:

“Reading any book by Jane Fancher is like sitting down to a cup of really good hot cocoa—rich with just the right touch of darkness to make it interesting. Her Science Fiction balances cutting-edge, hard science with character-driven plotting. Her fantasy is multi-layered, intricate, and unusual. Her characters walk out of the pages, grab you by the throat, and don’t let go.”

Could a writer ask for a better recommendation? Not in my book.

Thanks again, Patty. I love you!

For those of you who thought pronunciation was important…

Carolyn started reading the new Bren book to me today…and she’s changed the say SHE pronounces a bunch of the names.  When she read me the last book, she pronounced Machigi, Mah-CHEE-gee. Now, suddenly, she saying MAH-chi-ghi.  Go figure. Oh, and Najida has gone from NAH-jhi-dah to nah-JHI-dah.  Hmph.

So…bottom line, just pronounce things the way that sounds good to you. There isn’t really a right and a wrong.

Ja ne!

Ja ne!

Sheesh…I know I’m a slow reader, but this is ridiculous. Just had a bunch of things interfere. But almost done now, and it is such a treat. Sasha and Pyetr are so cute!

It’s a bit tedious…I’m going through and cleaning up all the html junque WYSIWYG programs put in. I’m not sure how Namo is creating these smart quotes. They just show up as angled quotes in the html panel.  I hope they work when we take the file into other formats. If not, I s/b able to do a search and replace with the decimal numeric codes fairly quickly.

We’ve pretty much decided not to justify the right side of the text. Since this will be “flowable”, right justified text on the smaller screens might be pretty unpleasantly spaced. It won’t look as “published book” I suppose, but I think it s/b more universally attractive and readable.

Skating went well today. Got to see OSG, which is always nice. She’s looking strong. I think her workouts are really paying off.

Ja ne!

Ja ne!

spotlightI had a terrible one at Miscon, and because I’m an idiot, I’m going to share it with the world. Fortunately, you can’t die of embarrassment! And it led to a very interesting (I hope) editorial experience. You just never know where inspiration is going to occur.

The Incident occurred at my reading, but to properly appreciate the horror, we need to back up to the writer’s workshop Patricia Briggs and I had with several blossoming authors earlier in the day. It was a great workshop…at least I thought it was. We had a good batch of stories, all with different, but mutually helpful problems. And I love Patty. Forget the fact she can write beautifully, she’s one of the most wonderful people I know. #1 bestsellers haven’t changed that one iota. 

Anyway, a substantial part of the session involved the importance of beginnings, where to start and how to give them impact. We had two very good examples, both by very proficient authors, one of which began about ten pages too soon, the other about ten page too late, story-wise. We talked about info-dumps, and making a beginning that presented The Problem, The World, and The Characters in a concise,  impactful way.

Good, solid session. Then, I was on a panel about editing, with another author I very much like and admire, Steven Brust. It went well, and I think we all learned intrustin’ stuff. Another good moment.

By this time, I’m getting just a bit punchy. I was filling in for Carolyn as well as doing my own panels. I’d had, for some reason, only an hour of sleep the night before (I wasn’t partying! I just couldn’t fall asleep!) and the Cherryh Crud was just beginning to make itself known in the form of a sore, scratchy throat.

Bravely, I head for my reading, having no idea what I’m going to read, but I’ve been talking about Closed Circle and the exciting things we have in store, so, hey, why not read the first original work we’re going to publish: ‘Netwalkers. It’s been, well, a loooong time since I read it. s/b fun.

So, I pull up the file; begin to read….and as I read, my heart sinks.

I don’t know if it was because I was exhausted. I don’t know if it was because I was thinking “beginnings”  and “editing” for two days solid or if it was the knowledge that when I was done with this reading, I was going to be reading (for Carolyn) one of the most beautiful introductory passages I’ve ever run across (Faery Moon) … heck, maybe I was getting ‘bored’ vibes from the nice folk I had gathered around the table, but it was terrible. Oh, it read smoothly, was informative and interesting, had a balance of humor and intrigue…but as a beginning…at that moment, in that frame of mind, it just plain sucked. I actually had to stop reading it.

The folks at the reading very kindly reassured me, but I knew. I knew it was wrong. Fortunately, I also knew what was wrong and how I was going to fix it.

You can’t really ask for more than that.

I promised I’d post the changes, but it’s much too long to put into the blog, so I’ve posted it as a PDF in the ‘NetWalkers section of my website.

Original ‘Netwalkers prologue

Revised ‘NetWalkers prologue

The original prologue was already there along with the first chapter. All that’s relevant at this time is the prologue. I’ll refine it more and cut out a bit more underbrush as I go through the next couple of scenes, which also need a similar weed-eating, but I thought some of you might find the comparison interesting.

Ja ne!

Ja ne!

Today, I donned my editorial hat to work on CJ’s Faery Moon. Thought you all might be interested in the kind of stuff we do for each other. Read the rest of this entry »