And it’s already up!

I fear #1 Bat Man Fan isn’t going to like it at all. (Gulp.) I will say this for him/her, he/she writes a heck of a review. These books aren’t for everyone and these reviews do an excellent job of pointing out the specific elements people might find most troubling/off-putting and I’m grateful to him/her for taking the time to write such diplomatic critiques!

I think many of the issues raised are actually addressed in Harmonies. I hope he/she gives it a try, but in all honesty, people looking for any sort of formulaic…or even just straight forward… answers probably won’t find them in my stuff, and will be disappointed. That’s why thoughtful reviews like these are so valuable.

I’m just kinda sorry that he/she took the cave scene that way. Stevie did try very hard not to expose Anevai. He was just, so he thought, doing what she wanted—which she did, just for the record! :biggrin: It’s not his fault he knows only one way to accomplish that…

I speak, of course, of the Wesser. Back and in full computer-crashing style.

I decided this AM that I was sick and tired of editing and prepping books and solving web problems and I was by golly going to start writing and writing what I wanted to write, not what I thought was most likely to sell. (I’m never right on that front, anyway.) So…I began Homecoming Games, the next step in the ‘NetWalkers saga.

I knew kind of how it began…one of Stevie’s infamous dream sequences. Then, a shift to a waking Stephen and Anevai. All is cool, all is developing with a proper degree of creepiness…then…Anevai used a Word. A Word in conjunction with herself and Dr Ridenour. A word that startled heck out of me…and, I firmly believe now, seriously pissed off the Wesser.

I stared at that Word. I tried to delete it, but deleting it went against everything I believe about writing. When the characters surprise you, you ask them why, you don’t just delete something that doesn’t, so you think, belong.

I decided, instead of deleting, to save the file, realizing at that point I’d been writing for about an hour (GO, ME!) and it was still an unnamed, unsaved file. (Oopsie!) So, I go to “save as”, try to create a new folder for Homecoming Games…

And WordPerfect, which never and I mean never crashes on me…crashed. Deader than a mackerel.

ARGH!!!!! I did a restart…and there wasn’t even an autosave!

HORRORS!

But the Wesser will not win! I resurrected the two scenes (bwahahaha) and The Word is still in there! (Double Bwa, Smith!)

And so, I plan to begin every day with at least an hour of actual writing!  You have no idea how good it feels to say that!

I just hit the Kindle publish button on UpLink. In honor of that step, I thought I’d share the review Faren Miller wrote for Locus all those years ago. It’s posted in its entirety with the blessing of Locus (thanks, guys and gals!)

Faren’s reviews of this series kept me going through the era of Warner’s refusal to send out review copies. She had to buy her own copy of at least one of them (Harmonies, I think…had I known, I’d so have sent her one!) In this case, she nails the big problem…GT and UL truly are one book. Harmonies starts a new arc. One linked to and built on the fallout from the first two books, but GT and UL are a complete arc and should have been presented that way. Unfortunately, Warner  just wasn’t having anything to do with a book that large…at least from a new author.  A lot would have been solved had they simply admitted GroundTies was the first of three…on the cover, in the book, I don’t care. Just  play fair with the consumer! But they didn’t…and so readers were left wondering.

Be that as it may…I share now Faren Miller’s review:

Speaking of conclusions…UpLink is the missing second half of Jane Fancher’s first novel, GroundTies. Together, they make a complete and satisfying book, steeped in the combination of tension, ambiguity, complex politics, and injured innocence that has become the trademark of Fancher’s friend/mentor C.J. Cherryh.

GroundTies introduced the planet HuteNamid, the mystery of its attraction for researchers (including one vanished pair), and a host of characters including the enigmatic Stephen Ridenour —the novel’s Cherryhan Young Man Under Pressure, a role he retains in UpLink, while Admiral Loren Cantrell is the Woman in Charge (and under considerable stress herself). As for the reader’s condition, there’s still plenty of nail-biting suspence here, but this book is the payoff, the one where the questions get answered and fates of several worlds are resolved or explained. As almost equally perplexing puzzles, Ridenour and HuteNamid gradually yield their secrets—which prove to be connected in interesting ways.

Reviewers spend a lot of time carping about endless series and needless sequels. While Fancher may go on to chronicle further adventures of Stephen Ridenour et al, GroundTies and UpLink should be regarded as a single entity, self-contained despite the annoying separation into two volumes. If you can handle close to 800 pages of almost unmitigated tension (there’s at least one breezy character to ease you through the tight-jawed crowd), read the whole thing as one book. No padding or wheel-spinning here—just the genuine article.

Thanks again, Faren and the whole Locus crew!

Getting access to my listings is downright dangerous. They have spots there for things like author comments and stuff like that. I’ve been trying to make my entries more intrustin’ and thought I’d share them with y’all…seein’ as how that’s been the sum total of my online presence for the last few days!

We’ll start with GroundTies (naturally). Read the rest of this entry »

I’ve added a separate page where you can go to discuss the NEW BOOK without putting spoilers on the main post page.

Check on the sidebar for the pages widget for Alizant: discussion

Well…isn’t that special? For some reason it’s not allowing comments on pages! Always did before. Going to try different themes. Pages w/b funny for a while.

Thanks everyone!

Or download, as the case might be. I can’t believe it. It’s actually done. Wow….Next up, Blood Red Moon…unless I change the title…

Or maybe…sleep….

Just…check out the link, okay?

http://www.closed-circle.net/WhereItsAt/?page_id=970

Katoji: Ask and ye shall receive…even if a bit late!

The “how” and “when” of RoC: Alizant is a bit involved (what isn’t in my life!?! :biggrin: ) A sequel involving Alizant’s machines was always “in the plan”, but after I finished Ring of Destiny, I really wanted to get back into my SF universe. By that time I’d gotten the rights to the original GroundTies Series back from Warner, whose SF line had pretty much gone down by the stern anyway. I also wanted to write a book on spec for the first time since my first novel to try to get some real feedback on my writing from new editors who weren’t already committed to a series. I felt my books still weren’t  as “accessible” as they could be, even without compromising my own style.

Thus, ‘NetWalkers came into being. I knew reselling the GT series was going to be difficult, so a new book and a prequel that would give the new publisher a market for the backlist was the plan. Besides, that was the book aching to be written. Wesley clambered for my attention throughout the writing of Ring of Destiny.

The following few years were … interesting. I was about halfway through ‘NetWalkers when we made the big move from OKC to Spokane. This makes for a very short sentence, but involved dropping everything to pack way too much stuff, prep a house for sale, and unpack once we got here. Again, a short sentence for a very involved and stress-filled procedure that took months out of my writing schedule.

‘NetWalkers consumed my writing time for the next couple of years as I wrote the original, rewrote several times, the final time based on the first real feedback I’d gotten from NY, which had been very, very helpful, then rewrote all three of the original books to include the expanded knowledge I’d gained from the prequel (as well as that feedback). This was a massive rewrite because the idea was to make them different enough to warrant new editions, yet still have the same story.

During this period, I also lost both my parents and we moved yet again.

Finally, in … 2004, I think, I wrote RoC: Alizant.  Because of the delay, it took quite a different direction than I’d originally planned…a far better one, IMO. My brain had had some time away from the series and characters and I was able to go back to the world with a fresh energy. At this point, I really can’t reconstruct what the original story was going to be, but I can tell you a new character is introduced that I’d never dreamed of five years before!

I also wrote it from  a very positive place mentally. DAW had ‘NetWalkers and the rewrites and was making noises that they were very, very interested. I had hopes that perhaps, finally, that series was going to get something remotely like proper care and feeding. So there’s some really upbeat moments in it that wouldn’t have been there had I jumped into the story immediately after I finished RoD, with Wesley still being sulky and the move and all the rest, still wondering what I needed to do to be more “accessible.” (That magic word…)

So…anyway…that’s how the actual physical writing of the book fits into the overall history. How the story fits into the series chronologically, it starts several months after RoD ends and centers around first Deymio’s wedding, then Alizant’s electrical company and a little fellow by the name of Jeremin. :wink:

Thanks for asking!  Back to work!

Been a productive weekend. Got back to work on the front and the dry streambed is taking shape. And Alizant’s cover’s done!!!!

Enjoy!

I know it’s silly, but I do a little snoopy dance inside every time somebody says they like my writing. The comments here, the emails…well, I just want to thank everyone.

I’m experiencing a curious dilemma…I’m sitting here with six new books that I just want so badly to put up all at once, but marketing sense (not to mention the fact I haven’t done covers for any of them yet) cautions me to dole them out slowly, even after I have them ready to publish.

For one thing, we need to keep CC fresh with new material. Every time we put something new on the main page, that generates web activity, which hopefully brings us new visitors. For another, there are two other people involved here and we need to coordinate so we don’t all put new stuff up at once.

And there are the problems involved with a new publication. If we screw something up and need to send out links to new “versions” that’s a whole lot easier with only one publication involved! Thankfully, most people who bought Heavy Time bought Hellburner and vice versa so I could just send the “new links” email to everyone. But if we had like five new books up there by all of us and had to sort out what to send whom, well, that w/b intrustin’!

Anyway, I’ll be playing with section illos for Ring during Nationals and will have it ready to post in a week or so.

I’ll also be working on ideas for the covers of those six new books.

So much to do…and the pond is beginning to wake up. I’m thinking I want to put up my little “incubator” for “hatchling plants” soon. (A metal rack with a plastic cover.) I’ve never done that before. Any advice from my fellow gardeners? When do you start seedlings?

Hi, y’all,

Sorry to be so non-communicative. Been working on getting Ring of Lightning ready to post and it’s proven to be more work than I’d expected. The file I had was the original that I sent to DAW, but a) it was written in Volkswriter, which meant some manipulation, esp to resurrect italics, and b) there were some things about that version that always bugged me, so I went through it line by line, mostly to get rid of word salad, but also to adjust some relationship issues that become much more important in the subsequent books (those things you don’t know when you begin a story…)

Anyway…then I figured I should go back and check the copyedits to insert whatever was valid in them . . . including the changes I’d made by hand … and they were as strange as I remembered them. I mean, there were the changes due to stylistic issues we had, which I’ve just ignored. i.e. single vs double quotes for ironic use of language in prose as opposed to actual dialog, and spelling issues…grey vs gray, traveling vs travelling…that sort of thing, but I was looking for the (very small…as in fewer than ten?) typo errors (it’s vs its) that spellcheckers don’t catch (I caught more in my line by line) but mostly, it’s the on-going question of…you got it, hyphens.

When I submitted the ms back in the pre-internet dark ages, I’d run the VW spellchecker and I got a lot of words it didn’t recognize that were two words “run together” so I hyphenated them to be on the safe side (except for my created terms). In the copyedits, it was sooooo weird. It was like, everything I hyphenated, the CE ran together and then the CE inserted hyphens in instances that even the spellchecker recognized as a single word. A word I ran together one time and hyphenated the next would quite reliably be reversed by the CE.

One of my favorite examples: storm-wracked. The CE wanted stormwracked, something I’d never ever ever have even considered and which cannot be justified by any dictionary I’ve found. And some of you wonder why we’re amused at the notion that our editing might somehow be lacking compared to books that have come out of the NY sieve.  :lol:

Fortunately, this time I have access online to a much more complete dictionary than the spellchecker dictionary in WordPerfect, so I’m checking as I go along. Which all takes time. But I’m getting there. Hopefully RoL will be available in a couple of days.